Hey Chris,
Over all they look good. Especially your tighter detail shots.
The "another" shot and the "one more" shot are my least favorite.
I personally find shooting the "two guys rockin" shots are harder than single shots and that's where you need to be more careful.
The "one more" shot is too soft for my taste and the guy in the foreground is not adding anything to the shot.
There is no cohesiveness between the two guys in the "another" shot.
There is a lot of emotion to capture in live music and I find that shooting tighter works for me.
Shooting live music is a lot like shooting sports, you really have to use your intuition to anticipate what you think is going to happen.
As well, listening to the music as it's happening is important because there are many "cues" between the performers that you can pick up on.
I hope this helps and keep up the good work.
If you want to see some of my past music shots:
my musicrod